Constellations

Constellations

A Poem by PHFASCES

I love to see the stars sparkle.
I could sit by the seaside at midnight and wonder. 
let my mind get lost while I ponder.
The beauty of these constellations,
In awe they leave me staring.
My mind untamed,
Creating scenarios, illusions and worlds worth exploring
I hope to embark on these wild fantasies
And together we can make them fantastical realities.
Robbed of words,
The thief called awe leaves me mumbling and concentrating in awe.
Leaving me repetitive and stuttering,
Yet my eyes not once leave that gaze
At the site of the stars and nebulae,
Glistening in glory with angelic music,
Obviously created by my overactive imagination.
Great tales of gallant victories
And heart tearing tragedies,
Written in each formation.
I must say to you while I stare into this marvelous wonder,
My dear,
Your eyes are my favourite constellation.

© 2015 PHFASCES


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A perfect ending to a amazing poem.
"I must say to you while I stare into this marvelous wonder,
My dear,
Your eyes are my favourite constellation. "
You left reader with perfect place and ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PHFASCES

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Coyote. That means a lot. It is also a pleasure to share.
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You did very well and you are welcome.



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So mind infusing are the lines "I could sit by the seaside at midnight and wonder.
let my mind get lost while I ponder." Your imagery in this piece done you well. Thanks for sharing and keep up the excellent work.

~Rob~

Posted 9 Years Ago


PHFASCES

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
I don't know if you wanted it to spelled that way or not, but isn't favourite supposed to be favorite? Also, this was a beautiful piece. I loved it, you continue to blow my mind with comparisons between beauty of the world towards a single person.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PHFASCES

9 Years Ago

I use UK English being in Southern Africa this is how we spell Favourite. Thank you for taking the t.. read more
Daydreaming

9 Years Ago

Ah ok, I just wanted to make sure lol.
this poem is beautiful. love it!!!!
-Silver

Posted 9 Years Ago


PHFASCES

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
-Sam-
Rose Jaeger Kaneki

9 Years Ago

Welcome!!!
- Silver
A perfect ending to a amazing poem.
"I must say to you while I stare into this marvelous wonder,
My dear,
Your eyes are my favourite constellation. "
You left reader with perfect place and ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PHFASCES

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Coyote. That means a lot. It is also a pleasure to share.
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You did very well and you are welcome.

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PHFASCES
PHFASCES

Johannesburg, Gauteng, South Africa



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