Sad Love

When he first met her

His heart blew up in awe

Possessed by this strange spirit of infatuation

He said to himself

"I refuse to let the feeling pass.

I refuse to be alone again.

I know I can love her better than than others.

I refuse the rejection and to sit by watching fools break her heart.

I know my new quest and it's her love i am after"

Words of self motivation.

A young sweet intimate gentleman trying to claim the new found

love of his life.

Lost in this journey.

All for a woman that will never accept him.

His persistence growing stronger,

but his infatuation blinds him from a sad reality.

To her,

he is merely there for comfort.

His heart break kicks in.

She is saddened  at the assumption that no man will treat her right.

Walking away and hurting the man that loves her the most.

Her foolish decisions circulating her thoughts like angry wasps

Tormenting her.

Injecting venomous doubts in her mind.

"What have i done to deserve such pain?"

Two broken vases.

In an abandoned building. 

Alone in a dark room as the winter's chill bites.

Numb from depression

Too sad to care for the cold.

Two hungry souls.

Love is their only craving.

They hear their cries.

Their eyes meet,

yet they don't realise it.

He is angry at her.

She is ashamed to speak to him.

"Why won't she accept me?

I've been so good to her.

Am I too kind?

What is Wrong with me?

Am I not attractive enough?

Does she she enjoy the pain?

Is she attached to drowning in pity?

What"s her addiction to simpletons only seeking her sexual prowess?

Why have I wasted so much time on her?"

"What" wrong with me?

Do I love too hard?

Am I too submissive?

Am I not good enough?

Why do they always hurt me?

Do good men exist or are they just a myth?

I know one who is good,

but will he even look at me now?

He probably sees me as garbage."

Questions within them.

Assumptions and mixed emotions engulfs them.

Patience and reason discarded.

They both stand up and exit the room in opposite directions

 Not knowing they grieved together.

As they depart,

their heart slowly shatter beyond repair.

A friendship has dies and disappears into thin air

as the cold wind blows.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful emotions and thoughts in the poetry.Two broken vases.
"In an abandoned building.
Alone in a dark room as the winter's chill bites.
Numb from depression
Too sad to care for the cold.
Two hungry souls.
Love is their only craving."
The above lines can stand alone. Powerful and worthwhile poetry. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[PHFASCES]

Thank you so much. Its a pleasure to share any day.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[maria ( rose)]

stunning with the visual imagery and subtle feelings it evokes...very nice !

[PHFASCES]

Thank you very much

[Bohrium Guy]

I think I been in this place a few times. You displayed the pain and frustration in your poem well and the visual imagery worked in a good cohesiveness. Hats Off!

~Rob~

[PHFASCES]

Thank you sir. highly appreciated.

[Bohrium Guy]

Welcome Bud!

[TwistedAngel]

sad... wonderfully written. i enjoyed reading it. you described the moments perfectly. well done

[PHFASCES]

Thank you so much. I appreciate it

[PHFASCES]

This is a little something based on an actual event. Well, there are some thing i almost hesitated to write about but i just poured out the feelings and played around with a few events and this came about. Hope you enjoy it. Feel free to drop any critics.

[katy B]

Beautifully scripted And relatable Thanks for sharing

[PHFASCES]

Thank you and it's a pleasure

[B. Boileau]

A sad but all too familiar tale, two hearts passing both yearning for each other... You discribed it just right.
Thanks for sharing
bill

[PHFASCES]

It's a pleasure. Thank you for reading it and thank you for the motivational review.

[Daydreaming]

An easily relate able read, I'm sure that most people are able to agree. Exiting the room opposite from one another, tearing at their hearts as if they were attached and now stretched to their ends. Collapsing on their thoughts and not actions towards one another is great! ^.^ Nice job.

[PHFASCES]

Thank you. The funny part is that it's based on a true story.

[Daydreaming]

We all have our pains, but they make the best words for us to show the world. And Sorry ^.^

[PHFASCES]

It's cool. and indeed. some of us just choose to use the pain as a tool to make art.

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

this is so beautiful and sad, love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[PHFASCES]

Thank you. based on a true story hey.

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

Welcome, wow.

[PHFASCES]

It's on how a good friend and myself seemed to destroy our friendship over the events in the poem and we eventually stopped interacting and that was that.

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

wow.........................................