Stay

a little something that came up after helping a friend get out of their state of depression

I wanted to run away

Leave everything behind

Find a new shell

Live at the bottom of the ocean

Live and be the water

Alone in the dark depths of the sea

But as I was leaving she told me to stay

 

I tried to end my life

Hang from nature’s arms

But she grabbed my hand

She held me tight

Tears in her eyes

She told me “stay”

 

I tried to slip away

And embrace the fire

But there she was

Waiting at the hearth

She told me to stay

Said I was all she had

And apart from her life, mine was her bliss

She is in-existent.

A fragment of my consciousness

Created to keep me sane.

Reviews

[TwistedAngel]

Wow! This is amazing. you describe the exact feelings i feel sometime. i even have a poem alike to this. You used the perfect words to keep the right atmosphere. loved it...

[PHFASCES]

Thank you very much. Much appreciated and I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Hope Rose]

This is really good. I love it, keep it up. Your work is beautiful and I love it

[PHFASCES]

Thank you. i will do the best I can to keep making beautiful work

[Hope Rose]

You are very welcome and don't push yourself this seems to come naturally to you

[PHFASCES]

Haha. it does. I have moments when i just zone out and start poeting up and do little freestyles on a daily basis.

[Hope Rose]

That's the best thing to do lol it's when a lot of people are at their best

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

amazing, beautiful, love it, your work is amazing and beautiful!! ;)

[PHFASCES]

Thank you. its all from my experiences,emotions and imagination. i do my best.

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

I meant every word that I said. You are amazing at what you do