Confession

This is my confession basically. I need to go somewhere with this. This poem is completely fiction if u r wondering. lol

I made up with his girl.

I knew she was his world.

But he didnt do her right.

Plus it was only for 1 night.

Then 1 nite became one week,

And one week became a month.

That month was May, and now today...

I gotta tell the truth cuz its eating me alive

The pain inside, i no he's gonna die.

But how do I live?

How do I remain.

When just 4 weeks ago she was saying my name?

 

Author's Note

Please... i no my grammar and punctuation is screwed up. But, I wanna no just what u think of it overall. What do u think of the message inside?

Reviews

[['tatiz speis]]

This is really nice man! I like this! think a lot of guys could relate to this. Men love to be heroes, but sometimes their hearts get in the way. Good job!

[Lexy]

I think your message is a common one, if you want my opinion. Good job on the rhyming, by the way.