Religion and Women

my views on women and religion...?

Religion and Women (December 2010)

Religion 

And women;

The cause for all things.

From poetry 

To Atom Bombs;

Blissful and painful screams.

Inspired breaths 

And prayers for death

And cause for souls to sing.

(Oh) Religion 

And women;

Essence of everything.

Author's Note

i don't believe in any religion...this should, i hope, add more significance to the poem...otherwise i wouldn't have said it...i think

Reviews

[Lovely Lady]

Wow... thanks for the vote of confidence in me/us!
Woman gives birth to inspiration... creation,
Man is the seed of inspiration planted in women to create!

There is a statement from one of my favorite songwriters,
"your hair sparks a religion." I didn't quite understand what he meant.
I do now. Your poem is awesome. I love it.~

~lovely

[LiveLaughLove]

my favorite lines are
"the cause for all things.
from poetry
to atom bombs"

women cause everthing from joy to pain and everything in between.
lovely just lovely

[Lilly Negoi]

ahhhh, the trojan war in a modern version :D:D:D sweeeeeeeeet misogyny

[Justin Littlefield]

Agreed. Religion is fairy tale and definitely causes mass destruction. Women are awesome but at the same time... you're right again

[Mason]

So true! one could say orgasms encite war. very nice poem.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

then you believe in women, as its like contrast to any religion? like both sides of one coin ? But woman is captured inside religion...

[.]

You know what they say 'behind every great man, there's a pushy mother'...LOL

[.]

. ah, beautiful ... but you see ... it takes only one man to turn a woman's world upside down ... :P ... and even i don't believe in a particular religion as such ... but i do believe in people who are made of bread, jam and a little god ... this poem is divine ... it touches that invisible magic potion at the core of the universe ... i believe one that is commonly referred to as love ... :) ... wish women and gods didn't inspire wars ... but grateful that they still inspire exquisite poetry and thought ...

[Grace Catherine C.]

Hmm, nicely put.

[TBird J.]

Perhaps women are your religion?
This is a great write, sir! "Inspired breaths" just works beautifully!