Narkissos

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Narkissos (December 2010)

I had a revelations of sorts,
An epiphany, some would say. 
An awe-ful thought struck
And all things were explained.
I understood the universe
And it revolves around my way.

I see things in prose
Well, I guess, mostly cons
Wonder what people think (of me)
Because to me, I am God.

You go about your mortal days
And give your praise to me always.
For it could not be another way.
Ohh, what an awe-ful thought!

Reviews

[Inkcognito]

So delightfully egotistical - simply awe-some that you see things in prose as well as cons while in the same vain, expecting nothing but praise from mere mortals!
The only reason the universe revolves around you, Mr Narcissis, is the fact that your head is the size of a planet! (and your writing really is awe-fully magniloquent!!)
LOL...awe-in all, I really thoroughly enjoyed this sententious little ponder - well done! You are "Light "years ahead of yourself on this one...and I totally loved it!

[Lilly Negoi]

awe-ful indeed :D:D:D:D:D

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Yesss, wonderful title too!
it could be not another way....

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absolutely loved it!!!!!!!

[Marie Harrison]

OMG...not another God to serve. Ha! Clever write.

[Mason]

being a narcissist is easy to do if youre talented. and you are. well done my friend

[Alexa Tasch]

how awe-ful and what a revolation i understand everything now!! well not really im still a little confused but i do know one thing.....this is a great poem!

[TBird J.]

The back and forth is fun-brings that humor level in: what an awe-ful thought!