Blue Flame
A Poem by
Light
cool, hot passion!
Blue Flame (December 2010) Oh my brilliant
Blue blooded flame.
Gorgeous, dancing,
Blown by your whims;
Cooling passions
With hot burning
Satisfaction.
Oh, please blue flame
Ignite my soul
Just once again.
© 2010 Light
Reviews
this is such a wonderfully impressionistic poem,
and it reads with purism~so beautiful :)
"Oh, please blue flame
Ignite my soul
Just once again."~~~so very creative!
:)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Its delightful..and sensual, just with few words describes feelings...
I like blue flames...
Posted 14 Years Ago
Its delightful..and sensual, just with few words describes feelings...
I like blue flames...
The most beautiful (and perhaps painful) thing about a blue flame is that once it is far away from you, you can't see it like any other flame. Those who burn with a blue fire in their hearts are truly precious.
Posted 14 Years Ago
The most beautiful (and perhaps painful) thing about a blue flame is that once it is far away from you, you can't see it like any other flame. Those who burn with a blue fire in their hearts are truly precious.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Nothing quite like a little blue blooded flame to ingnite a red hot fire in the soul...Light it up!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Nothing quite like a little blue blooded flame to ingnite a red hot fire in the soul...Light it up!
Short, sweet, I enjoyed it till the last line.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Short, sweet, I enjoyed it till the last line.
Nice short one. I like your economy of words.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Nice short one. I like your economy of words.
Just one again... let me live one more blue day!
Love this; very satisfying ~ and warm.
~lovely
Posted 14 Years Ago
Just one again... let me live one more blue day!
Love this; very satisfying ~ and warm.
~lovely
Cool. Or should I say hot. LOL I'm such a dork! :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Cool. Or should I say hot. LOL I'm such a dork! :)
I can def feel the passion through that!!
Posted 14 Years Ago
I can def feel the passion through that!!
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Added on December 1, 2010
Last Updated on December 4, 2010
Author
Light Los Angeles, CA
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My thoughts, my ideas and perception; this is all I am. I try to reflect those things in my writings. enjoy it or don't, but i sincerely hope you do.
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