Planets

My mind was wandering as I watched this documentary on the universe!

Planets (November 2010)

Blessed by Jupiter 

And dressed by Mars,

I flew with wings 

Gifted from Mercury 

And delivered Pluto's 

Lonely message of death

To the beings of Earth.

I swam in Neptune's oceans

And made love on the shore;

Only sure of Venus' beauty

As we surfed the stars.

Riding gamma waves

In cosmic ways

I made rings of Saturn and 

I proposed to the Sun.

Becoming one with the universe;

God's one and only love

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I really cant express how much I love this! It`s wonderful ,so original and I like space poetry ...Yes, god is love...Thank u for this poem!

[TraverseTheSea]

Brilliant. When I read through it and stopped it felt like a natural flow and ending! I'm fascinated with space and I've space documentaries as well so I definitely connected here!

[Angel Bird]

- I made rings of Saturn and
- I proposed to the Sun.

A resplendent poem filled with sparkling and unfathomably beautiful images, and what a wonderful metaphor it also is.

Wonderful job!

[Lilly]

The wonders of the universe...
A really captivating piece. Beautiful writing.

you've made this as intriguing as Greek mythology. :)

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. ahhhh ... beautiful ... an enchanting epic ...