Planets

My mind was wandering as I watched this documentary on the universe!

Planets (November 2010)

Blessed by Jupiter 

And dressed by Mars,

I flew with wings 

Gifted from Mercury 

And delivered Pluto's 

Lonely message of death

To the beings of Earth.

I swam in Neptune's oceans

And made love on the shore;

Only sure of Venus' beauty

As we surfed the stars.

Riding gamma waves

In cosmic ways

I made rings of Saturn and 

I proposed to the Sun.

Becoming one with the universe;

God's one and only love

Reviews

[Lovely Lady]

Impressive... making love to the universe. Nice.
~lovely

[India Brooks]

I love this! It's quite intellectual as well as poetic! Great imagery and interesting voice. Bravo :)

[Champagne]

Quite beautiful. I like these short poems. The imagery is vivid, one can almost picture floating through the planets.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

wow this is such a really neat poem.. i love how you captured the planets

[Shelly Braen]

I've gotten chills. What a love. What a true and beautiful love. This is timeless and never ending. I adore this.

[justice]

Definitely an interesting read. I love when true inspiration hist. Letting the mind wander creates some of the best images and poetry in my opinion. I really liked the read. Thank you for sharing. All the best.
J

[BehindTheMask]

I love things about the universe. Bravo!

[Alexa Tasch]

oh how cute and beautiful. your mind should wander more often!

[JanieB]

I just love this. Well done.

[JCharo]

Very creative. This was an excellent idea and very profoundly expressed.