Death

Death is a woman!

Death (November 2010)

Death stood over me

Slowly blowing

Her soothing breathe

Of life's sweet relief

A gentle wind 

From black licorice lips

As each dying kiss

Brings me closer to peace

Macabre in her eyes

As she moans and she sighs

Legs strapped around my waist

As I'm trapped between her thighs

Breath and existence exchanged 

For Ecstasy and bliss 

As I give life to 

Lifelessness   

Reviews

[Alexa Tasch]

very nice. great description.

[JCharo]

Give life to lifelessness-Very Good. I enjoyed this poem alot.

[Lilly]

Ahh! Brilliantly written - love the images "black licorice lips" and the last two lines are amazing. I love the rhythm of this and the picture too.

ah, I like this- death in the form of desire.

"Macabre in her eyes
As she moans and she sighs"
are my favorite lines.

I can't get over your rhythm, heh.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Oh ,thats affect on me so much! It`s strong and so professional written...You are great!

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[Nobody.]

Damn! that was my kinda poem. loved every dark and brilliant syllable man.
cheers!

[.]

. brilliantly written, buddy ... it's the perfect seductive dance of death ... and the last two lines are sheer genius ...