Your faith in my hands.

You inspire me to build tall towers,
cry from happiness for hours and hours,
that pour into streams that I flood with my dreams,
that turns into steam from the passion of you, and me.
I know it's insufferable, the hours spent passing away,
waiting hour by hour, that seems like days and days.
These months have been passing by a little too quick,
but I remember everyday because the memories stick,
and i'm glad it's going by at a good pace,
because we have a lot of time left to face,
and I never said that that could be a bad thing,
because it's something I wouldn't trade for anything.
I would do anything to simply make you smile,
i'd take the extra steps, go the extra mile.
I've been seeing a lot of things lately that i'd never thought i'd see,
feeling a lot of golden feelings that are making me into what I want to be.
I can handle this, I can take responsibility if you let me.
We can live together, loving forever, touching oh, so tenderly.
I want to whisper in your ear,
the things that could potentionally temporarily make us dissapear.
I want to fill your heart with cheer,
and let you know i'm consistent, and there's nothing you have to fear.
Anything to do with me, or anything else on this planet,
because if any mother f****r tries to hurt you I would not stand for it.
I'm going to save you each time you go to fall,
whether you think it won't even happen at all,
but I will be there standing tall,
waiting for you, waiting for you to call.
Just give me your heart, completely,
I can show you I am passionate for you eternally.
I can show you, you can place your faith in my hands,
I can show you you can trust me,
I just need you to please believe,
and pay attention so you see what isn't normally seen.
You won't be dissapointed, I promise the results are deserving,
and both of us will be what it's rewarding.
I know this is all new to you,
but it is to me too.
I've never ever loved anybody,
not even close to nearly as much as I love you.

Reviews

[Fear Corrupts!]

This is pretty good, great rhythm, good flow.
A very honest piece of work, obviously.

Well Done,

[ Fear Corrupts! ]

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Ha! This was cool. Definitely a song in my eyes. The rhyming was too good for it not to be one. Never been a fan of love poems, but you obviously put a lot of thought and presumably experience into it. Very impressive. Excellent work!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood