To Match Your Eyes.

I can't concentrate.
I can barely breathe.
I can not cooperate.
I cannit see.
I was hoping the best in me
wasn't equivalent to the worst in me.
I wish you could see,
the difference that I believe.
I'm sorry for the anger,
i'm sick of all the fights.
You shouldm't say that we are strangers.
Look at how I end up these nights.
I promise I wouldn't cry this long
if it didn't effect me just as bad too.
Neither one of us is right, or wrong,
and that's why they'll never end soon.
I could never apologize enough
for everything.
I would never be one to bluff
about how for you, princess, I would do anything.
I can't tell you how much
I f*****g hate myself,
sometimes.
I'm sorry it's not enough,
I debate myself,
constant times.
I want to
surround you in flowers,
painted like sunsets
to match your eyes.
Forever too,
we would spend hours
laying down to cuddle, and rest,
without disguise.
For you I could write
endlessly.
Down the page,
with consistency.
Talking about your
smile
that melts me.
Talking about the
miles
that it takes me.
Talking about the
escape
that you've gave me.
Talking about the
ways
that you've saved me. 

Reviews

[Jessica M.]

i really like your writing
i'm not really sure why
you're one of the very few writers on this site i can read all the way to the end
i guess it's because the words are so heartfelt.
nice write.

[Niki Disaster]

I think any woman would be happy to have this written about her. It's very passionate, and apologetic....Slightly submissive. I would have to say that the rhyme scheme is sporadic and feels somewhat forced, and at times, it reads like a run-on sentence. As a song though, I think it would be perfect!