I'd Wait Around Forever, Maybe A Few Moments More (I can't begin to tell you how good the scenery is from here.)

I can't begin to tell you how good the scenery is from here,
both inside of the future, and some things that are near.
I'm hoping that this summer i'll get to see you around,
because I have no idea just where you are to be found,
and there's nothing more I want then a chance to win your love,
because i've been waiting for so long, and enough is enough.

As a matter of fact, i've been fainting, and fading,
and for months with myself, i've been arguing, and debating,
and I know what it is that I want,
and I know what it is that I need,
there's such better places out there I gotta see,
and a huge desire to learn just where I ought to be.

I've been playing all of the same songs,
the same lessons that i've already heard,
and there's nothing new that comes along,
there's nothing more for me to learn,
so with love in hand, and soul in heart,
my new life i've been creating is beginning to start.

I think i'd wait forever,
even a few seconds more,
if only we could say never,
and mean it, to the core.
I think i'd wait forever,
wait just a few seconds later,
so maybe I could see with my own eyes
some things that I would know I could never begin to deny.

Now, don't leave me here alone,
follow all of the signs, and just know that I bear the truth.
There's nowhere i'd rather roam
than your sunset smile, and your green grass meadow eyes,
like skies over the valleys;
places where seeds are meant to be sown.
Please, I would love to come together,
be more than just one,
because without you I am lonely,
and there is nothing that could ever be fun.
I'm so thankful that i've gotten to hold your image dear, deep down inside,
and out of it i've gotten much happiness, and tears that I have come my eyes.
I'd wait around forever,
maybe a few minutes more,
as long as you could promise you'll meet me on memory lane,
because the world without you is making my eyes sore.
There's nothing i'd rather see;
there's nothing i'd rather be, than yours.
I'd never want to be,
I would never have to be anything else, anything more.

Reviews

[fgsgdsf]

Brandon,
This is beautiful.
This made me cry. haha, Im lame.
This is definantly something I can relate with.

"As a matter of fact, i've been fainting, and fading,
and for months with myself, i've been arguing, and debating,
and I know what it is that I want,
and I know what it is that I need,
there's such better places out there I gotta see,
and a huge desire to learn just where I ought to be."
That would have to be my favorite part. Great job.

[Kriss]

That was awesome. I mean literally AMAZING. The flow of the poem and the emotion is consistent from begining to end. And it brought some serious tears to my eyes. #1, because it was so wonderfully writen, with a clear image. And #2, because I can eerily relate to it, it is to a T. I loved it, keep writing, you definitley have a great talent, and it's wonderful that your using it and letting us partake!

♥Kriss

[Alysa]

Brandon, this poem is very beautiful and well written.
I had tears in my eyes.
Nicely done.

[Kayleigh]

Absolutely beautiful! =]
Makes me stop and think what life would be like, if we never experienced love. =)

[Cortney Lynn]

hmm... this was rather adorable! especially since its coming from you. do you mind me asking who this is about?

[Treasaigh (The Solitar..]

There's nowhere i'd rather roam
than your sunset smile, and your green grass meadow eyes,like skies over the valleys;
places where seeds are meant to be sown.


I love this part=) I have green eyes..I could only wish for someone to say that to me=)

[Treasaigh (The Solitar..]

How romantic=) Such sweet endearing words from the heart. What girl wouldn't want to hear such beautiful words of love. You write with such devotion and desire. Lovely poem=)