DUMB POEM

When the time we're running out of thoughts. Nothing can write.

I'm sitting alone

Thinking of what I need to know

Full of hurdles

So many obstacles

I tried to research

But it doesn't work

I stopped for a while

But it doesn't help

There are things I want to say

Nevertheless, I can't tell

My heart beats so fast

My life full of blast

I leaped higher

It feels like bolder

My poem wasn't good

I need to practice my mood

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

LOL. You're too smart to "practice your mood".
I like this simple piece of someone who wants to write something better but ended with a vent...
We call such situation as "writer's block".

[Marl Ignatius G. Igon-igon]

Yeah, writer's block. :))) It reminded me my creative writing class. :) Thanks for appreciating.

[Vidya Bacchus]

I love your poem .Great write

[Marl Ignatius G. Igon-igon]

Thank you. :))

[Scott Mou]

I like it! I loved how you mad a poem about making poems (I think)

And yes..your poem WAS GOOD

[Marl Ignatius G. Igon-igon]

Thank you for appreciating my works. :))

[Nwanna Onyeka Benedict]

This is a powerful poem. Your emotion was shown. It is really nice

[Marl Ignatius G. Igon-igon]

Thank you. Actually, when I'm doing this poem I think about different topics.

[Nwanna Onyeka Benedict]

keep it up. Life is all about inspiration and imagination.