DUMB POEM

DUMB POEM

A Poem by Marl Ignatius G. Igon-igon
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When the time we're running out of thoughts. Nothing can write.

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I'm sitting alone
Thinking of what I need to know
Full of hurdles
So many obstacles

I tried to research
But it doesn't work
I stopped for a while
But it doesn't help

There are things I want to say
Nevertheless, I can't tell
My heart beats so fast
My life full of blast

I leaped higher
It feels like bolder
My poem wasn't good
I need to practice my mood

© 2013 Marl Ignatius G. Igon-igon


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LOL. You're too smart to "practice your mood".
I like this simple piece of someone who wants to write something better but ended with a vent...
We call such situation as "writer's block".

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marl Ignatius G. Igon-igon

11 Years Ago

Yeah, writer's block. :))) It reminded me my creative writing class. :) Thanks for appreciating.
I love your poem .Great write

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marl Ignatius G. Igon-igon

11 Years Ago

Thank you. :))
I like it! I loved how you mad a poem about making poems (I think)

And yes..your poem WAS GOOD

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marl Ignatius G. Igon-igon

11 Years Ago

Thank you for appreciating my works. :))
This is a powerful poem. Your emotion was shown. It is really nice

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marl Ignatius G. Igon-igon

11 Years Ago

Thank you. Actually, when I'm doing this poem I think about different topics.
Nwanna Onyeka Benedict

11 Years Ago

keep it up. Life is all about inspiration and imagination.
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Marl Ignatius G. Igon-igon
Marl Ignatius G. Igon-igon

Caloocan, NCR, Philippines



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Marl Ignatius G. Igon-igon | 19 | Caloocan City, Philippines | AB English student | Aspiring writer | I mayn't be the most intelligent and creative in the universe. I mayn't be handsome like them. .. more..

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