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A Poem by Brad P
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Speaks for itself

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When I think about your eyes I'm hypnotized,
My spirits rise, and my stomach fills with butterflies,
I realize your sick of other guys and all their lies,
no lie we have potential, so just don't ignore the essentials,
take you from residential to presidential suites,
in a minute, soon as you hit the room,
I smelt your fragrance in it,
wish that I was bathing in it,
this is real, no game or gimmicks,
just have patience miss and we will grow,
it just takes a minute, sky's the limit,
so just give me your digits,
because you're simply exquisite, 
no need to fidget,
just give me a kiss every time I visit---

© 2016 Brad P


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The rhyming in this is so flawless, the long words in use of vocabulary, rhyming such long words, its pretty impressive, something I want to be better at.
This whole piece was beautiful, romantic, emotional, deep, meaningful and moving.
Such a passion filled piece, sounds like it really came straight from your heart.
Your pretty talented.
Loved this poem.
Keep on writing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Super cute poem! (: I enjoyed this ♡

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Brad P
Brad P

FARMINGDALE, NY



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Writer of poetry and fiction, aspiring author of fiction. I am an avid reader, preferably fiction. I am one of those people that if asked my favorite author, my response is, "Can I give you my top fiv.. more..

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