Astrid Speak

Written for Starfish's Nonsense Competition

learn to spell the treat 'bajingus'

spin sweet VJ on the Jay-Jay

mimic mewling of a bluejay

hobnob via corn cob lingus

- stinging snigger septic stains

dripping from the zoosfer foster

buy solutions via roster

- MRI alzheimic brains

you know I found one that I like

colloguing in the willowwacks

- hunkered down brown tater sacks

and finding that the fit was right

we stombled on the wimple worn

haranguing crowds of maple peeps

massaging variegated leafs

until new stimple tops were born

Reviews

Why I chose this piece above the rest was because of its sound-sense. It is like a Jazz number being read to you. I love made-up words - and it seems you employed loads of those. Hey, why does Shakespeare have to be the only person to make-up new words?

The end wants to make me laugh, scratch my head, and meet you for tea. Thank you for the entering the contest.

[Nishant Gupta]

nice one read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".

[Helen Crutchett]

Goodness Brad, what to say? Kind of "stream of consciousness" write which surprisingly worked very well. Had to read it a few times to try and get the gist of it, but no matter it was a very pleasing piece of work in my opinion.

Haaa, I get it, should have read the description at the top first! Understood completely (sort of) now lol!

[Arianna]

not sure i quite understand it.
however it has a certin pull to it
that makes me love it anyway,
like a song in a different languge,
you dont understand a word.
but you love it all the same.
thats how this makes me feel :)
well freaking done!

[Muse]

The nonsense is brilliantly penned~
MRI alzheimic brains
And I thought I had a hard day! Your Muse was perhaps drunk? lol

[Jeremy Baker]

This should be read out at her wedding, if a certain person makes an honest woman of her!

[Miles]

OMG LOVED THIS SO MUCH!! :D

[blakjassy]

This is so funny and clever... even if i do have the unfair advantage of context... PS Astrid still loves you!