Undeserving Of A Title

Undeserving Of A Title

A Poem by Brad Nugent

this poem
is s**t
scraped shamelessly from
a shoe

and wiped on
a previously
pristine
lawn

like the artifice
seen through
lovers' eyes

in a gallery

a canvas painted
pointlessly black
acquired
acclaimed

words
unashamed
to lack reason
or rhyme

© 2011 Brad Nugent


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i love this!!! and what i love most about it is that the irony will be lost on most.

But i still can't help it - I have to say that this is awesome, extremely funny and it brings to mind the awful art you see hanging in a gallery that makes the toffs stroke their manicured beards with manicured hands as they try to outdo each other with overly verbose descriptions of something that looks like a toddlers high chair after breakfast!!

You are really really bad at writing a s**t poem!! lol :-)

I can't wait to read the next one!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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i love this!!! and what i love most about it is that the irony will be lost on most.

But i still can't help it - I have to say that this is awesome, extremely funny and it brings to mind the awful art you see hanging in a gallery that makes the toffs stroke their manicured beards with manicured hands as they try to outdo each other with overly verbose descriptions of something that looks like a toddlers high chair after breakfast!!

You are really really bad at writing a s**t poem!! lol :-)

I can't wait to read the next one!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark and introspective, and yet you had me laughing out loud almost the whole time! Not many writers can do that so well, and here you do it brilliantly. Great, work, clever, inventive and original. One of your best!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Brad Nugent
Brad Nugent

Australia



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