Breathless

quickly

take me to bedlam

and cure preventive

sanity

breathe life into your

unequivocal devotion

and help me to swallow

this rational

pride

lodge your ever fervent

enchantment

in my lost and

humid mind

and warm my life

Reviews

[blakjassy]

I think i would like to close my eyes and hear you read this... I suspect it could be a very provocative and seductive piece when whispered into someone's ear in a breathless voice!

I have yet to attempt the words for that week and I feel that this will be a hard piece to follow...

[Poetic Beauty]

Aww the metaphors are done well and I love the imagery it produces.

[Jeremy Baker]

"preventative sanity" - that's brilliant! I think I might need some ....

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The potential possibility of someone who could "warm life" thus - makes this piece transcend thought and traverse poetry in all its hues.