soldiers of my heart

although we are not together anymore, she still deserves this for the happieness she gave me.

The Soldiers,

at the gates of my heart,

they stand firm and tall.

i do not command them.

no no not I.

they have one master and one alone.

she is the queen of my life.

the fuel that keeps it beating.

the love that keeps me alive.

the healing elixer for my damaged soul.

The Soldiers,

they only follow her.

with every word she says,

they shall obey.

the command to heal,

the command to leap for joy,

even the command for pain,

yet it is not often.

they are sworn to her no matter what.

her face is engraved in the armour.

her name is thier national anthem

no one shall ever command them but her.

before her it was nothing but a wasteland.

constantly clinging to things,

that only broke the kingdom more.

now they are forever united under one name,

MADDI!!

MADDI!

MADDI!

they shout for her all day and all night.

only contented when she is against me,

her lips on mine,

in an unbreakable embrase.

for her name and her face is all they kn ow.

her love and embrace is all they desire

no one shall command them but her.

and never again shall we be broken

Author's Note

i know reall bad grammer but i needed it to flow out. i hope she likes it

Reviews

[Eden]

Beautiful stanza. Very choice words. A masterpiece. :)

[Boy of the red]

thank you very much! nice name, i love mythology

[Eden]

Thank you dear, mythology has always been a favorite subject of mine.

[Boy of the red]

what stanza were you talking about though?

[Eden]

she is the queen of my life.

the fuel that keeps it beating.

the love that keeps me alive.

the healing elixer for my damaged soul.


This one. It's really beautiful. And it shows the love in your heart. :)

[Boy of the red]

thank you :))

[Eden]

Welcome. :3

[Pax]

a nice and strong love for your dear beloved... love is really an inspiration for a good write such as this... i felts its heartfelt release... the joy, pain and just being alive when you are with her... that's life in love... there is loyalty in this... a romantic offering my friend...

[Boy of the red]

it is indeed my friend. thank you for your kind words

[Jack...]

Love, oh the keeper of the key, the chains that bind us tenderly and sure to that one...who commands and we follow. This is a strong deliverance of love. Nice job.

[Boy of the red]

thank you! i agree completly

[Carolann Dowsett]

Wow this is awesome to feel such love for someone is truly beautiful.

[Boy of the red]

Thank you. I really do love her

[Carolann Dowsett]

That is wonderful you are a good writer.

[Boy of the red]

Thank you very much :) I appreciate that

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[ForeverNever]

This is a wonderful:)
You're so talented, my little Poe.
Much love!
#YourNumber1Fan

[Boy of the red]

Thank you babygirl