the fine line between s**t and shine

the fine line between s**t and shine

A Poem by Fra/c/ture
"

last four lines appear courtesy of charles bukowski's poem "as the poems go"

"

and maybe just maybe

the fact that the words

won’t come

is supposed to

mean something

like stop

or at least

slow

d

o

w

n

before you do

something stupid,

do damage irreparable,

it's like charlie chinaski

told me two years

after he died:

the best writers have said

very little

and the worst,

far too much.

 

© 2008 Fra/c/ture


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i realy liked it and i realy liked the title


justintime

aka justin

Posted 16 Years Ago


ITS PRETT GOOD LIL UNSURE THOUGH OF THE MEANING GUESS ILL READ IT AGAIN SINCE ITS SHORT BUT IT WAS OK THO ....

Posted 16 Years Ago


Dam, cool! And moreover true.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 6, 2008
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