Alone

Alone:

I’m in a crowd
I’m on my phone
The music’s loud
but I’m
alone.

I start to weep
For seeds I’ve sown
That I must reap
when I’m
alone.

Happiness past
Sadness grown
It’s time at last
since I’m
alone.

Reviews

[JayKay]

I like the simplicity of this poem and how it still carries a lot of emotion in it. I guess it can be interpreted in many different ways. I personally interpret this as a sadness (though not everyone sees being alone as a sad thing). Thank you for sharing this for us to read.

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I want to check your poetry. Since you like my one poem. I like your minimalistic form with few words. Sad emotions and self focus . Even i can feel on the end hint of humour. I really like it.