Now, before I start this review, be warned that I am a very nitpickish person. I have nothing against you or your work, just be warned.
This could of been better. It is only giving a very brief and and unclear scene, and is never expanded upon because of how strangely short it is. It has great wording, but the poem could of definitely been longer to give the reader a very long-lasting sense of immersion so they feel like they can rely on you to create great poems. Everything starts out small, and this poem is a prime example.
You have potential, and your choice of wording being combined with a longer poem could potentially create something beautiful and captivating.
Now, before I start this review, be warned that I am a very nitpickish person. I have nothing against you or your work, just be warned.
This could of been better. It is only giving a very brief and and unclear scene, and is never expanded upon because of how strangely short it is. It has great wording, but the poem could of definitely been longer to give the reader a very long-lasting sense of immersion so they feel like they can rely on you to create great poems. Everything starts out small, and this poem is a prime example.
You have potential, and your choice of wording being combined with a longer poem could potentially create something beautiful and captivating.
Is beauty poem, with a journey of feelings. Is very intense and the scenes are very beautiful. Thanks for share your talent, I hope you write more poems, I will be your follower.