Injured Dove

A Poem by ~A.J.P.~

Weeping like rain,
Smiling through pain.
Running from hurt,
Crumbling to dirt.
Falling from sky,
The dove will now die.

~A.J.P~

© 2009 ~A.J.P.~

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Eternally Elemental

Wow... really heartbreaking.
So short but so powerful in the imagery. You can see it scene by scene with every single line. That is a hard thing to do, but it came out amazingly.

So sad... and captured and shared so well with all its sentiments.
I think everyone sheds a tear for that injured dove.

Memorable, and if I knew how to favorite this thing with the new site I would. But the favorite option disappeared *angrily shakes fist at the site changers*

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Eternally Elemental

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Coyote Poetry

A excellent poem. The pain can overtake us and we can feel like we are dead.
Coyote

Posted 15 Years Ago

Shutterbug

This is a very strong poem. Very good Write Thanks

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Added on December 2, 2009
Last Updated on December 2, 2009

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~A.J.P.~

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I'm a 22 year old preacher's daughter with an overactive imagination. I have a passion for music (write it, sing it, listen to it,) and love telling stories. I also write poetry. I've always loved re.. more..