Lost In The Riptide

Lost In The Riptide

A Poem by Draco Paladine

You watch the crest of the wave slowly crash down to wash you away. You know you should be frightened but all you feel is peace as you let go of all of your pain and anger and negative emotions. You can never win against such a force of nature so why bother? You feel yourself sinking. Your last thought? I wonder who'll miss me. Then nothing as the white light envelopes you.

© 2014 Draco Paladine


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Very powerful. Should be terrifying and yet it is comforting. Clever.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Draco Paladine
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