Empty

You look into my eyes and see nothing. You ask if I'm okay and I don't respond. You try to make me talk but nothing happens. You even go as far as to tickle my feet which usually drives me nuts. Still nothing happens. Then you realize that what you're touching, holding, and talking to is no more than an empty shell of a broken man. The real me, my soul, is gone to find a happier place while my body sits and waits for my return.

Reviews

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is pretty interesting, and very sad. Well done.

[Sami Khalil]

"The real me, my soul, is gone to find a happier place while my body sits and waits for my return."

Pen on...................

[Draco Paladine]

thank you. that was written during a dark time in my life.

[Sami Khalil]

I understand...You are welcome...:)................

[Roxie Demonia]

Verry interesting....I like the imagery.