Max DoomA Story by BoretxThe very first story I began to write,It started out as a blog on my myspace but now it's in my word docs being put together piece by peice heres part of it :DThe day was like any other day, clouds in the sky letting everyone know fall rain was on its way. I was in my social studies class at the time, learning about someone from WW2. I was just about to dose off when suddenly a near blinding light filled the room accompanied by a screeching roar. The entire room shook making all of the students including me fall to the ground. Then we heard the crash, followed by a massive shockwave which shattered all the glass in the room. I slowly stood up thinking to myself how confused everyone else must be if even I was scared by the previous events. Then hunter burst through the door a look of both urgency and shock in his eyes. “They’re here.” He said as I remembered the conversation we had back in 2007 when my training with him had just began. “Ok Robert, your making progress, which is surprising given that you cannot perform any jutsu at the moment.” He said as I stood in his backyard hanging on every word.
So yeah prett short so far,but it's getting there.It looks and fells alot better than when I wrote the first of these in blog form almost 2 years ago :D © 2010 BoretxAuthor's Note
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1 Review Added on November 16, 2010 Last Updated on November 16, 2010 AuthorBoretxLillington, IDK D:, United States Minor Outlying IslandsAboutI am a young writer/poet looking for the right inspiration to make my material soar,I'm writeing two stories at the moment,one more than the other of course,both are action/adventure and semi-futurist.. more..Writing
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