Love

Someone seriously just tell me what the f**k is wrong with me.

Love sucks.

Why can't I find one god damn person that would like to date me.

Seriously what the f**k is wrong with me.

Am I ugly?

Am I fat?

Am I stupid?

Am I just too god damn weird?

Someone just tell why I'm so unlikable so I can fix this s**t.

I'm tired of always being alone.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I know this isn't really a poem

Reviews

[May Flowers]

It may not be a typical poem but the fact that it is so real and raw makes it easier to relate to!

[Russ]

Ha ha I like this. I don't know or care what poetry really is. This just reminds me how s**t it can be to be alone.

[Kilgore Trout, Jr.]

Brittany: of course it's a poem. Anyone who tells you otherwise--it's a poem, it's not a poem, it's half a poem--needs to get out of poetry, drop out of school, stop taking themselves so freakin' seriously, stop wearing black and go be a plumber. Or something. (Not that I have anything against plumbers plumbing.) Just sayin'.

[Aaron the Baron]

I can't say that this isn't really a poem. To me poems have no structure, each poem is exactly what it needs to be. Some poems hide their intentions and their message in layers of prose, others do not. Creativity is not something that I would hold to one side of the spectrum. I think that this is a poem in fact, just a very raw poem, like an unpolished jewel. As natural as the Earth intended.

[Neon]

Yeh.. this's not a poem but here your feeling're expressed into the words. The purity of your soul, the anger about love, the frustration about life but the beauty of someone's still existed into the poem. It's just a feeling of your heart. Nicely converted.