Crappy Poem

My creative writing professor, Dr. Beth Myers, wrote the first "Crappy Poem." She told me to make it better. The second "Crappy Poem" is my version.

Crappy Poem

Ever since I met you.

I am beyond happy.

You are the world I

Never knew I wanted.

--Written by Dr. Beth Myers (intentionally bad)

 

Crappy Poem Revised

 

From the time our

Four eyes locked,

As we stared at each other

On the gymnasium floor.

I knew that we would never be. 

A fool I am,

For letting simplistic desires,

Thoughts of love

Overtake my logic.

We are on opposite

Teams.

--My version of the same crappy poem.

Author's Note

Meh...

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked it as well. It does hold a lot of deep emotions within it...being in love is really cute. I really enjoyed this as well. Thanks for sharing. :D

[Apathy To Empathy]

Meh? Me like! XD It holds a lot of power deep down in, and i enjoyed reading it!