The Place Where Dreams DieA Poem by JessieI'm thinking of entering this to a poetry contest... Any comments? Please review!
A strange wispy white line
I watch as you descend You float and dance about From beautiful end to end You come so softly quietly I scarecly do believe That you've come all this way Just to be with lil ol me I watch with a smile as you come You're suddenly close by Like an image sent from heaven Into reality you fly Your colors they're magnificent The way you dance for me I feel my heart beating In time with yours so free I twirl you in my fingers I weave you through my hair I wave you about like a flag I watch your colors and your flare And all this time you let me You do not object You accept all my caresses My love you don't dare deflect But suddenly you flicker And your colors die away I wonder why you're leaving As you wither and float away Tears well up behind my eyes And I turn my face away For i finally understand Why you came to me that day And as you go back up to heaven Where you go from leaving me Then i cry again because I know now what you're meant to be You my love were a dream One i did not realize When the opportunity arose You flickered out and died I should have taken chances I should have been more brave But now you're gone and all i have Is regret as i loose faith I know where you went now When you ascended to the sky You went off to that lonely place The place dreams go to die
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