Gonna Be Alright

This is the first song I write,please let me know what you think ;)

This is the first song I write ever!Hope you all like it. (:


Do you know what its like,
to sit here and live such a lie?
Slowly dying inside.
Someone save me, someone save me,

Piece by piece, I'm drifting away
Scream by scream I am giving way.
Let me change, let me be who I need to be.

Tearing up my life.
Turning back time,
like it was yesterday when I,
Used to sit by myself and cry.
Don't tear up my life.
I just want, everything to be, alright.
Don't tear up my life.
Everything is gonna be alright.

I watch the seconds tick by,
this precious life of mine.
Are we wasting time?
Tonight I should be by your side.
And I need you here by mine.

Your words pierce like bullets,
Someone save me.
Someone save me tonight!


Tearing up my life.
Turning back time,
like it was yesterday when I,
Used to sit by myself and cry.
Don't tear up my life.
I just want, everything to be, alright.
Don't tear up my life.
Everything is gonna be alright.

I hear your words, I’m
Slowly drifting into sleep.
Thought you were tearing me down.
I guess I was wrong.
Turn this life around,
Turn this life around.
I screamed, I yelled
For someone to save me from this nightmare.
You saved me, help me turn this life around.

I thought you were

Tearing up my life.
Turning back time,
like it was yesterday when I,
Used to sit by myself and cry.

You didn’t tear up my life.
I just wanted, everything to be, okay.
You didn’t tear up my life.
Everything is gonna be alright.
Yeah, everything is going to be alright.

Author's Note

Hey this isn't a poem but it's the closest to a song(: This song is sung with a sad melody,and tune.Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Nightwind]

From the title, you gave me a 'heads up' that there was gonna be a happy ending at the turn. Yet as I was on the train to 'Sadsville' the turn was more of a hard jerk towards 'okaytown' near the end. Nevertheless I enjoyed the song and even before reading the Author's note I was able to sound out a sad tune just from reading the lyrics! Nice job :)