A Magical Place
A Book by Booklover200014
 Jake is a rebellious teenager whose life takes an unexpected turn when he gets sucked inside an old mirror. Now he must find a way to get back to his world with the help of his new friends.  © 2013 Booklover200014
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I found this story interesting. At first the main character comes off as confident and cool, maybe even immature, but later he turns out to be a caring individual who wants to take care of his mother. I'm curious as to what will happen with this mirror as well.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Awwww... Thank you so much for the review. After posting this chapter, I was a little nervous that n.. read moreAwwww... Thank you so much for the review. After posting this chapter, I was a little nervous that nobody would like it. But your comment made me feel much better. Thanks! I will try to update as soon as I can. :D
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I thought this was a good first draft. It certainly hooked me in, and I'm intrigued to find out what happens next.
There were a few points that I picked up on, but I'm sure you'll pick up on them when you edit it. Overall, a really good effort!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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I found this story interesting. At first the main character comes off as confident and cool, maybe even immature, but later he turns out to be a caring individual who wants to take care of his mother. I'm curious as to what will happen with this mirror as well.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Awwww... Thank you so much for the review. After posting this chapter, I was a little nervous that n.. read moreAwwww... Thank you so much for the review. After posting this chapter, I was a little nervous that nobody would like it. But your comment made me feel much better. Thanks! I will try to update as soon as I can. :D
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Booklover200014Perth, Australia
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Hey everybody. I joined this website so I could make some new friends that are more like me. The friends that I currently have are more into their phones than talking to me.
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