When?

When?

A Poem by Boogieman Alzalaus
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Again, More Problems With Her. It Was Getting Better Then. Then Went Down Then Up. Youll See Later On In My Works.

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The Pain, The Pain,

I Know It Sounds Dramatic.

The Love, The Love,

What Am I An Idiot?

The Hate, The Hate,

It Grows Evermore.

The Tears, The tears,

Falling To The Floor.

The Rage The Rage,

It Blinds Me So.

The Darkness, The Darkness,

Its Overcoming Me.

The Light, The Light,

It Slowly Fades Away.

The Gate, The Gate,

It Blocks The Way.

The Lock, The Lock

It Holds The Gate In My Way.

The Gun, The Gun,

Itt Shoots The Lock On The Gate That Blocks My Way.

The Life, The Life?

......... It Will Soon End.

© 2008 Boogieman Alzalaus


Author's Note

Boogieman Alzalaus
Ignore The Repedativeness And See the Actual Meaning.

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=[.....you know what's sad? Things back then sucked but I'd take it back in a second even tho it's far from perfect. Sorry I realized too late.

Posted 16 Years Ago


The repetitiveness adds to the meaning, rather than detracting. This is an interesting piece. And I think we have all felt those moments full of conflicting emotions at one point or another.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Boogieman Alzalaus
Boogieman Alzalaus

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I've matured a lot since I started this account ten years ago. And I'm looking back and thinking that's it's time I start writing again. My name is Don. And I live within every one of you. Messa.. more..

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