Shapers of the Dream

There is a stirring in the depths, a sense of new beginnings.
A swifter pace now steers your steps, the spirit’s tempo quickens.

A new horizon calls you forth, ablaze with fire and glory.
The challenges you've faced thus far, shall become part of your story.

You've navigated storms and swells, you've braved the tallest mountains. 

The dance of life now casts its spell, amidst youths crystal fountains.

The cup is full, the time is nigh,to spread those hard earned wings. 

Just like a bird you've learned to fly, embracing changes freedom brings.

Yet don't forget that in this world, such freedom demands a duty.
To uphold God’s most sacred word, the sharing of your bounty.

You hold such promise in your hands, hope now unfurls to reign supreme. 

Time to live the life you’ve planned, For you are shapers of the dream. 

Reviews

[charlie]

Nice rhythm in this, BonnyRivers.
It looks like a great poem for graduation, and sounds sonorous to the hilt.
Most of all, the optimism and faithfulness strikes me as most beautiful.

[BonnyRivers]

Hi Charlie. I actually wrote this for my seniors and they used it as the reflection at their Graduation Mass so you are on the ball! Many thanks for taking the time to comment - you are my first and I shall be forever grateful ;)