Moth
A Book by Kion B.
On the edge of adulthood Max tries to pave his own way into the world. Struggling with accepting ordinary life he finds solace in a dangerous world of his own imagining.
© 2016 Kion B.
Author's Note
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Hello, this is my first story on this site and in general.
It starts with a short chapter that introduces the character Max to the audience. I tried to paint a picture of his personality and daily life so the readers (if any) can get some ideas about him.
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Reviews
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This is a very interesting story. The first chapter is really good except for a few typos (which you already informed me you'd fix). I really found the story's beginning very interesting and the depiction of the character Max was also good. It appears you are off to a good start. Keep up the good work and good luck in your future endeavors. I look forward to reading more works by you in the future.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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