He saved me

Growing up MTV and friends molded me
Into a "somebody" cause a "somebody"
Is all anybody wants to be even if that
"somebody" isn't you. Growing up friends
Had control and God was a joke just hopping
One day you'll be awoke into seeing his powers
Once you break and friends can't save you
You prey to god and he'll carry you
Cause god loves everyone and to him you
Are a somebody

Author's Note

Comment please :)!

Reviews

[Arly Parent]

It's got a cool flow. But the flow doesn't come through as well as it could. You have run-ons. You've gotta break it apart more.

Growing up MTV and friends molded me
Into a "somebody" cause a "somebody"
Is all anybody wants to be
*even if that "somebody" isn't you. [either a long dash or giving it a line of its own]
Growing up friends
Had control and God was a joke
*just hopping
One day you'll be awoke[n] into seeing his powers
Once you break and friends can't save you
You prey[pray not prey] to god and he'll carry you
Cause god loves everyone and to him
you
Are a somebody