Seasons of our love

Love has seasons sadly sometimes winter comes without a spring.....

 

 

Seasons of our love

 

 

In the spring of our love

Your touches were hesitant

Your lips conveyed your passion

Your eyes portrayed your love

 

In the summer of our love

Your body burned me

Your passion the fire inside you

Your love all consuming

 

In the autumn of our love

Your passion mellow and fruitful

Your eyes burned autumn gold

The first leaves began to fall

 

In the winter of our love

Your passion cold

Your eyes freeze as the frost

The chill descends in winters shroud

 

For there will be no spring

 

Boneman 12/05/09

Reviews

[Honeypot]

Hey! I like this one. I love the way you used the seasons to show how the relationship changed. There is a simple truth to this that is very nice.

My favorite stanza was the Summer stanza.

"In the summer of our love
Your body burned me
Your passion the fire inside you
Your love all consuming"

Its a lovely poem with a sort of bitter sweet ending. Its always sad when relationships end. Wonderful job as always Boneman!

[Sophie]

i have only just remembered my password for this site. Eejit that i am. This is a very beautiful poem, honestly written with feeling. The last line says it all i think for a lot of people & relationships. jope you are still writing =)

[Gheeneil]

It could have been perfect if those four seasons were present. Somehow along the way, something must have caused the cycle to break. It's so sad but these things just happen. Perhaps, such happened for a reason. All in all, this is a lovely write.