Romantic Mare's nest.

A strife between my heart and my eyes over Chika Virgin, a damsel that captured my soul. Dedicated to Chika Onuigbo

A romantic mare's nest so real in abstracts.
My head drains slowly along deluge of thoughts.
Despondency is uses to replenish my gaiety as truth and lie combat.
My eyes and heart both in flawless quest,
Skirmishing; fighting over a food for the gods.

The formers in their right and latency strive
To spare nature the cheat; the heart for sight.
Delusion of self will merit in such-
'Cheer; when the head's abode is the sea.
To nurture no misfortune, they lie the truth the heart is telling.

And the latter bestirred his head to heedless;
of strife and blows.
Combat knows him the herald of their fuition's death,
To live and be loved by the goddess.
He puts his blood.

Reviews

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Love will consume anyone. i know what love is all too well thanks for sharing.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and beautiful poem my friend.
"Combat knows him the herald of their fuition's death,
To live and be loved by the goddess.
He puts his blood."
The above lines can stand alone. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[nazia]

You are so consumed by this love my friend. A beautiful piece full of emotions dripping from every word of it :)

[~]

Ohhh.. she has got you good my friend! there is no verse that fails to express this combat within your desires.

[AaronFreitas]

"To be loved by the Goddess... he puts his blood" I love those lines my friend. A very good piece that I enjoyed :)

[wordman]

reality and delusion,at what point do they merge together
a longing poem,great write my friend