Please Do Not Go!

Written when the pain of 'bye', said by a good friend alighted.

I do not lie.
I lie amidst truths untold.
Hunk of prank; galling to digest.
The sweet sorrow of lively death,
overwhelming odds of a blissful dream.

Pofaced in a laid lie,
where death is for immortality.
I feed on its hostile hope,
reality in a garment of uncertainity.

Now, your "bye" afflicts in a tearful gaze.
It born a poignant choking in a dream like snare.
Mournfully, I pread...
Please do not go!

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice and touching poem. You did great...:)......

[Captain Rilen]

Fantastic piece of poetry. I understand the feelings behind it. Can't wait to read some more.

[Blood Ink Diary]

Profound...the poem cuts right through the veins. Shall return in due time to read your world ! Cheers