A Whale Of A Time!

Farewell is my accolade,
I say to the time gone by.
Die lively and visit no more.
No wrench is worthy in our parting.
Guests about in my new abode;
a dainty dahlia of dancing damsels,
With blasts of light-hearted pleasures;
smiling faces that never cease,
revelling in snogs.

Do here lived in the past?
The thought took me back to the forbidden home!
Embracing the saliva-soaked pillow,
No damsel in in sight;
the abused past still my quest.
Because life is a dream.

Reviews

[ANTO]

"a dainty dahlia of dancing damsels" - I see you are no stranger to alliteration yourself Bonaventure - this is sublime writing with a smooth beat.

I did have a wee stumble at the line - "Do here lives in the past" - but Im sure there is just a typo there.
The Last line - "Co's life is a dream" - I'd have just written "Because life...." in keeping with the style of the rest of the poem - but thats just a personal opinion - its your writing B.
:)

[Bonaventure Onuabuchi]

Really there's a typo here, and I have to resolve that sir. (Do here lives in the past)..... The verb should take a past form..... And the last line is just as you had guessed, the use of co's instead of 'because' is only a personal choice, but I'm going to do something about it. Thanks for the constructive approach.

[ANTO]

Thanks for taking it so well. I appreciate that Bonaventure (what an excellent name by the way)

[Sami Khalil]

A good title, poem and succession. Bravo, sir...:)..................

[Bonaventure Onuabuchi]

Thanks to you sir, for having time to read and review.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the thoughts and questions brought to life by the poetry.
"Do here lived in the past?
The thought took me back to the forbidden home!
Embracing the saliva-soaked pillow,
No damsel in in sight;
the abused past still my quest.
Because life is a dream."
The past must be remembered as a lesson and try to improve place and life. The poem is hard and direct. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Bonaventure Onuabuchi]

Thanks so much Koyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Geo Lawrence]

you are good. please keep up the good work