Goodbye

I've been falling

Hoping

Waiting

For someone to catch me

Someone to love me

But no one does

Not today

But I've been hoping

Wishing

Thinking

That in the end

It'll all be okay

But that's where

I'm wrong

I just don't belong

In a world

A world like this. 

Reviews

[A. Kim Spradling]

The beginning of this poem reminds me very much of a poem I wrote call "Risk". When I write, I write about myself or about others who have said something to me that I NEED to write about. Is this truly how you feel? I've often felt like an outsider that does not belong or fit in. I like this piece. There is a sense of longing here.... I am often thinking and longing myself. Good Read!

I've read all of your work. I am looking forward to reading more.

[Hardboiled Capitalism]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it.