Past Flights

Just some lingering fond memories that I wish I could turn back the time....

Do you remember the weekends spent,

Camping out under the stars in a tent?

Falling asleep in my arms you slept,

Hosting the pleasures that were kept.

I was there to share what I could give,

It was our moment in time to love and live

We laughed by the fire enjoyed the moon,

Proclaiming love to each other we swoon.

Held hands walking the tree lined trails,

Lantern light shadows of lovers never fail.

You came to me once and seen it first hand,

Then in the moment we lost it all like sand.

Wish I could turn back time....

Dedicated to JW in Jersey

Reviews

[Mari R-J]

I would take out the last stanza. The rest is good

[Bohrium Guy]

Thanks perhaps you are correct.... better to leave sleeping memories to rest....

~Rob~

[Mari R-J]

That verse that ends with sand is good. That last stanza is like unnecessary. If it ends with sand is like mysterious and boom, mic drop

[Bohrium Guy]

Gotcha and thanks for taking the time to review my raw writes :)

~Rob~