The Girl Next Door

Damn she is awesome!!

Sitting on the porch a candle lit,

Long brown hair and a body fit.

Occasionally a wave or a smile,

A gesture she took notice while.

She haunts my dreams and soul,

For her name I do not know.

Afraid of rejection I stay on my side

Maybe I lost my self esteem I died.

So I watch from a distance and hope,

She might attempt a conversation rope.

Still nothing yet she is a beautiful sight,

Maybe one day I will overcome my fright.

Muttering the words hello without being scared,

Of being told no or that friendship isn't paired.

Till then I will sit and adore...

The Girl Next Door.

Reviews

[Leo]

Still nothing yet she is a beautiful sight,
Maybe one day I will overcome my fright.
Till then I will sit and adore...
The Girl Next Door

I loved those lines, very creative and added a twist to your poem..keep it up

[Bohrium Guy]

Thanks for the review...

~Rob~

[T. Edana Talbott]

Aww!!! This is SO sweet and frustrating! Get your bum over there!
You'll never know until you try

[Bohrium Guy]

I think I would stand a better chance flirting with you LOL!

[T. Edana Talbott]

Haha, don't knock it til you try it, friend.

[Bohrium Guy]

Cute.... :)

[Bohrium Guy]

I think you would be amazed , I am comlex yet simple.. but my mind is forever in thought.... careful dreams do come true...