Age

Age

A Poem by Bohrium Guy
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Thoughts about being old....

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Don't tell me your to old or I'm to young

Hearts still feel, love and romance strung

If your deemed an adult the love is great

The problem is finding your real soul mate


If you accept that age doesn't mean much

The caring and love your heart will touch

Stability and meaning are made a priority

Not hopping from bed to bed in sexuality


The romance and care is pure in respect

Because of our lessons we won't defect

The feelings to please have and to hold

Become so much more in brightly bold


You look down on age your already lost

True love and romance is the sad cost

Because your already blind to the fact

Mutual existence will always be a pact

© 2015 Bohrium Guy


Author's Note

Bohrium Guy
Thought brought on by several individuals on aged relationships.... Thanks Poison!!!!!

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Aye, man. My pleasure :) This was a very interesting topic you brought upon the table. I would love to participate in any further discussions you may have. This was very well written. I love the way it was showing that someone was telling others that they are not too old for love.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

McBear

8 Years Ago

Ah, I see what you mean.

17 year old playing games with youngins isn't wrong as long .. read more
Bohrium Guy

8 Years Ago

Correct, because essentially you are both close in age. But to have a 30 year old who knows the girl.. read more
McBear

8 Years Ago

Ah, I see. Thank you for that. It is very interesting, yet complex.



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very interesting topic.
-Silver

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Rose Jaeger Kaneki

8 Years Ago

NO YOU ARE NOT AN IDIOT. I just got told something funny by a friend
McBear

8 Years Ago

WHat does "Reality kings" mean xD
Rose Jaeger Kaneki

8 Years Ago

Idk, ask bohrium guy
Aye, man. My pleasure :) This was a very interesting topic you brought upon the table. I would love to participate in any further discussions you may have. This was very well written. I love the way it was showing that someone was telling others that they are not too old for love.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

McBear

8 Years Ago

Ah, I see what you mean.

17 year old playing games with youngins isn't wrong as long .. read more
Bohrium Guy

8 Years Ago

Correct, because essentially you are both close in age. But to have a 30 year old who knows the girl.. read more
McBear

8 Years Ago

Ah, I see. Thank you for that. It is very interesting, yet complex.

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Added on December 17, 2015
Last Updated on December 17, 2015
Tags: Wisdom, Love, Age, Romance, Passion, No divide!

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Bohrium Guy

Somewhere close...., OH



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