Touching Whispers

From the 2008 Archives

A gentle breeze called care and kind

Blows through a heart so well defined

Leaving traces of passion and romanced

Making the day happily well enhanced

Real or illusions the heat has become

The question remains will I succumb

This new heat a warmth given me

Has open my eyes to what could be

A million dreams an internal flame

Somehow there is no one to blame

I feel I like I swallow every emotion

I want my heart felt in commotion

For love is given unconditionally

From strangers that know and see

Still I wonder if my thoughts progress

Would it leave me under some distress…

Reviews

[Mara]

great flow and rhyme

Beautiful start
'A gentle breeze called care and kind
Blows through a heart so well defined'

Thank you for sharing:)

[Bohrium Guy]

Thank you for your nice review and taking the time to read my works....

~Rob~