Battle Wounds

Battle Wounds

A Poem by Bohrium Guy
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How I feel right now.... :(

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The commander and chief said to engage

War of words advanced, the tempers enrage

Words shot precise to make a deadly mark

Mines planted hidden triggering a spark


Capturing feelings and ripping to shreds

Messing with emotions tearing of threads

No helmet was worn just fear gripping tight

Trying to win the argument in a snipers sight


Grenade explosions ringing my damaged ears

Bayonet launches left bleeding with some fears

My support is gone just left to carry the war time

Where battle rages on and no one seeing a crime


With words hitting deep piercing my soul

No medics around to repair the soldier whole

Just lie in a ditch with sand covering my face

Alone, shattered hoping death I will embrace.

© 2015 Bohrium Guy


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Oh simba, your medic is here

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bohrium Guy

9 Years Ago

Oh how I wish.... A lot of problems would be solved on both sides...
Sarah

9 Years Ago

Your medic is here even if its miles apart (and on pain meds)

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Added on November 22, 2015
Last Updated on November 22, 2015
Tags: Battle, Pain, Alone, Pergatory

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