Timely Sustenance

Today is a special day for me to express what I feel...

A wind blew a week ago, the sensation calm

Whispers from words, a breath in my palm

Collision infinite and clandestine in dreams

Mixing emotions with words glistening beams

Slowly unimaginable my feelings grew deep

Stars and night sky held my thoughts to keep

A voice like angel is fluttering her soft wings

Pushing her appeal as she is pulling the strings

Gently reaching the places I hid away locked

Whispering her harmony I had in past blocked

I needed to feel and hold steady my inner course

Leaving all my memories of anger and remorse

Like solar rays shining and growing inner peace

Cherished woven treasures romance lined fleece

Capturing my essence and filling my inner divide

She is my dream where now my time will reside

For Sarah.... Thank you for being you!

Reviews

[Salem Gray]

Wow, I usually don't like rhyme schemes in poems, but I think you did it quite well here. I loved the word choice, it seemed as though each word was carefully selected to be in the poem. Also, some beautiful images in here as well:

"Like solar rays shining and glowing inner peace."

Very powerful and colorful line.

Great job! :)

[Bohrium Guy]

Thanks, I appreciate your nice review!

~Rob~

[Sarah]

Ok, you have me in tears simba!! Thank you!!!!

[Bohrium Guy]

Well tears wasn't exactly what I was reaching for but they will do... LOL