Love as a Chess Game

Some abstract writing I done relating love to objects then to poem

The Chess Game of love has some new jewels

Let’s lay it out so everyone can grasp the rules

The object to win is the love that will so greatly bind

The pieces will be said and the thought well defined

The Pawns are the problems and hurdles we face

That makes life bumpy while we move into a space

One by one they are shoved in to some action

Playing a move in hopes to make a bad reaction

The Knights are not straight the move by a horse

They tell a story and in some case a due course

Taking the Pawns and removing them with might

Allowing the two hearts a great chance to unite

The Rooks are the homes separate acting as one

Soon to be together bringing both under one sun

Carefully built and cared poured into the stone

Soon to have two chairs and only one throne

The Bishop his duty well all should be known

To maintain God’s rules and love to be shown

To insure the bound its here to stay forever

The ties that are made no splits or to sever

The King is the man a stern rule of force

A giver of love that carries its duty course

The voice when she can’t speak to stern

The loving hand when sadness takes turn

The queen with her beauty and love so fair

Leaving a touch with love and no despair

Bringing in softness and filling kings heart

Making the life so much the boards part

The Chess Game of Love the winners so grand

Playing till the end and the two make a stand

Two hearts two loves and a life they shall hold

Growing with age watching the children get old

Once they are gone the kids that so remain

Set on love and so well carry on the game

There are no judges no awards to be given

The Chess Game of love is life’s good liven

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You are correct my friend.
"Once they are gone the kids that so remain
Set on love and so well carry on the game
There are no judges no awards to be given
The Chess Game of love is life’s good liven"
The game of chess is my favorite game. A wise person know winner isn't always important. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Bohrium Guy]

Thanks for the review, I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Have a great day!
read moreThanks for the review, I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Have a great day!

~Rob~

[Bohrium Guy]

Please note.... the "read more" seems to happen on WC when for some unknown reason I sign ~Rob~ no offense.

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

wow, wow, wow, this poem= wow, amazing work my friend, love it

[Bohrium Guy]

Thanks I was a little worried that the concept didn't stick well to the theme.

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

welcome, and it does

[caffeine]

such a eloquent metaphor. Liked it.

[Bohrium Guy]

Thank you, its always nice to have someone out of the blue recognize my work. Thanks for your review.

~Rob~