Love as a Chess Game

Some abstract writing I done relating love to objects then to poem

The Chess Game of love has some new jewels

Let’s lay it out so everyone can grasp the rules

The object to win is the love that will so greatly bind

The pieces will be said and the thought well defined

The Pawns are the problems and hurdles we face

That makes life bumpy while we move into a space

One by one they are shoved in to some action

Playing a move in hopes to make a bad reaction

The Knights are not straight the move by a horse

They tell a story and in some case a due course

Taking the Pawns and removing them with might

Allowing the two hearts a great chance to unite

The Rooks are the homes separate acting as one

Soon to be together bringing both under one sun

Carefully built and cared poured into the stone

Soon to have two chairs and only one throne

The Bishop his duty well all should be known

To maintain God’s rules and love to be shown

To insure the bound its here to stay forever

The ties that are made no splits or to sever

The King is the man a stern rule of force

A giver of love that carries its duty course

The voice when she can’t speak to stern

The loving hand when sadness takes turn

The queen with her beauty and love so fair

Leaving a touch with love and no despair

Bringing in softness and filling kings heart

Making the life so much the boards part

The Chess Game of Love the winners so grand

Playing till the end and the two make a stand

Two hearts two loves and a life they shall hold

Growing with age watching the children get old

Once they are gone the kids that so remain

Set on love and so well carry on the game

There are no judges no awards to be given

The Chess Game of love is life’s good liven

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You are correct my friend.
"Once they are gone the kids that so remain
Set on love and so well carry on the game
There are no judges no awards to be given
The Chess Game of love is life’s good liven"
The game of chess is my favorite game. A wise person know winner isn't always important. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Bohrium Guy]

Thanks for the review, I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Have a great day!
read moreThanks for the review, I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Have a great day!

~Rob~

[Bohrium Guy]

Please note.... the "read more" seems to happen on WC when for some unknown reason I sign ~Rob~ no offense.

[NeiL ArandA]

I saw this and I am glad to see another poet write about chess game and relate it as an analogy to the life everyone live in. I wrote a poem about Chess but not as good as this one.

[Bohrium Guy]

Thanks for the review and I tried being a little different using objects in relation to love. I am glad its reaching new people and reviewers.

~Rob~

[NeiL ArandA]

Great imagination is the same in playing chess .

[Bohrium Guy]

Just me nothing more or special.

[Madalina Coman]

I love this! So creative! I really love the end and the idea that life goes on and that, well, looking back, the game still keeps being played, never getting old because love is that necessary and it's never the same. Lovely piece of mind ♥

-Madalina

[Bohrium Guy]

Thank you Madalina, your review was very much welcomed. Thanks for taking the time to readmy works.

~Rob~

[Jenay]

I love the poem. I understand the whole thing. I love it so much. Keep writing. And I would love to read more.

[Bohrium Guy]

Thank you, Jenay! Thanks for taking the time to read and review my writes.

~Rob~

[Emily]

Lovely poem!
Keep it up!!

[Bohrium Guy]

Thank you Em, this means a lot to me.

[Valentine]

I really like the last two groupings. A well thought out write. Valentine

[Bohrium Guy]

Thank you very much for the review... I feel honored.

~Rob~

[maria ( rose)]

fascinating, I am totally speechless !!! Your creative mind is captivating to the point where I actually felt like I was playing a game of chess..just awesome !!!

[Bohrium Guy]

Thank you, I was hoping to capture that imagery and mix it. I didn't know how it would really be received hence I took the chance in writing.

Thanks for your review.

~Rob~

[maria ( rose)]

my pleasure, You mixed it well:) glad you took that chance !!

[PHFASCES]

As one who plays chess, this was brilliantly laid out and each piece was symbolically used in the most perfect of ways. This is just breath taking, A well written piece indeed.
Thank you for Sharing

[Bohrium Guy]

Thanks I also play chess and I got the idea while do so. Ironic what I found to make a poem....
read moreThanks I also play chess and I got the idea while do so. Ironic what I found to make a poem....

Thanks for the awesome review!

~Rob~

[P.J. Amey]

ya know in a real simple way.

I love me some chess.

and this reminded me of me lovin' chess.

10/10 well done!

[Bohrium Guy]

Awesome!!! Thanks so much for your review!

~Rob~

[Briana Noël Manzan..]

Very interesting concept, I like the story-telling, elaborative feel to it, and the explanation of the part each piece plays...Well done, fellow.

[Bohrium Guy]

Thank you so much Briana, your review was most welcomed.

~Rob~

[Briana Noël Manzano]

Anytime :)