Just Me

Reflections of me...

I see your tears, cries of frustration

Self inflicted pain in the suffocation

The longing to be, inner place told

Want to feel special somewhere bold

Coloring the tides, people and faces

Changing your mind so many traces

I held out my hand, gave you the rock

Gluing the pieces, helping take stock

Showing my kindness, care above all

The judgment I have none to install

The sponge I remain left to be free

Who I am inside? Just me

Reviews

[McBear]

I really liked this, Its great c:

[Bohrium Guy]

Thanks for your review. A friend of our asked me to review some of your stuff and I will gladly when I have a free moment from insanity to read them.

~Rob~

[McBear]

Thank you sir c: I just am brutally trying to get my writing out there. I have received lots of critique. I wanna be a novel writer some day :)

[Valentine]

If the rock is a diamond...yet you are a sponge...soaking up what ever she does to you...why does she cry? Valentine

[Bohrium Guy]

Maybe its not me she cries for....