The Ache of Love

Some little ideas that popped into my head tonight. Hope you all enjoy this.

There is hidden a pain so deep

It burns

its solid

And oh so very steep

A token longing for another so real

Taking

giving

Wanting more of a loving deal

A passion not defined every emotion ripped

churning

Burning

The agony of love shows it's well equipped

The want of her and the need of him inside

So great

So Powerful

No escape from a loves deepening reside

You try your best to ignore all the signs given

working hard

Listening to Music

The deeper it goes love is always well driven

Give in two lovers the ache is so brilliant in the dark

deep inside arms

a locker to flames

Two lovers find peace in lovers set sails to embark

Reviews

[Gah Yan]

This poem is honest and relatable. Each phrase is split up leaving the reader aching for more. When I read it, it made me slightly nervous. I feel that the poem could be more honest if it didn't have a specific rhyme scheme. Good work. I can tell this was a first draft.

[Lonely soul]

I love this poem! You really capture the hurt and pain people go through

[Bohrium Guy]

Thank you, I practice banging my toe on furniture to come up with these ideas.... unless I am writing a poem. :) Saturday humor.....